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"Sinking" - Written by Me (by April666)
Dark souls become entwined.
Like sick and bloody lies.
Burning you to your demise.
Sick pain as you fade.
Sinking into your own cave.
Your deathly body all I crave.
Sinking into flesh.
Eating you to death.
SINKING...............
Watching your life desipate.
Your death I will anticipate.
You'll be mine to create.
One last breath you take.
Shows all of your f*cking fate.
Devil's soul you shall make.
Sinking into flesh.
Burning you to death.
SINKING..............
Memories of a bloody kiss.
Reminds me of what I miss.
All because of this dirty bliss.
Your death is screaming for you.
And death rides to me to.
I can take this life from you.
Sinking into flesh.
Eating you to death.
SINKING..............
Sinking into flesh.
Burning you to death.
SINKING.............
Dark souls become entwined.
Like sick and bloody lies.
Burning you to your demise.
SINKING..........
SINKING..........
SINKING..........
sinking.....
Like sick and bloody lies.
Burning you to your demise.
Sick pain as you fade.
Sinking into your own cave.
Your deathly body all I crave.
Sinking into flesh.
Eating you to death.
SINKING...............
Watching your life desipate.
Your death I will anticipate.
You'll be mine to create.
One last breath you take.
Shows all of your f*cking fate.
Devil's soul you shall make.
Sinking into flesh.
Burning you to death.
SINKING..............
Memories of a bloody kiss.
Reminds me of what I miss.
All because of this dirty bliss.
Your death is screaming for you.
And death rides to me to.
I can take this life from you.
Sinking into flesh.
Eating you to death.
SINKING..............
Sinking into flesh.
Burning you to death.
SINKING.............
Dark souls become entwined.
Like sick and bloody lies.
Burning you to your demise.
SINKING..........
SINKING..........
SINKING..........
sinking.....
Its very good for its specific genre. Do you find your not inspired to write that often? I get like that. Been a few times I've not wrote a poem in a year or two, then just hits me.
My poems were very dark when I was younger, as I've grown up they have expanded a bit but still have that dark edge.
Really liked this. You're good :)
My poems were very dark when I was younger, as I've grown up they have expanded a bit but still have that dark edge.
Really liked this. You're good :)
I don't really wright poems but i'm wrighting a book :) and your really good
I can write several ways I just went 3 months and just wrote this one. Then I noticed Californiadreamin rapping so I tried making a funny... and posted my first rap. & I am one of those girls who hates rap. Lol. The lyrics just came to me.
Yeah I like rap but can't do it, white girls can't rap. Well I don't know any that can lol
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