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The storm (guess thatll work as title) (by loveembignsexy)

 loveembignsexy (15)    (44 / F-M / Indiana)
8-Aug-12 4:05 am
There was a storm that fell upon my calm
I was taken out of role
She had me to my breaking point
I completely lost control
She made me turn into someone else
A someone i dont know
And its hard for me to comprehend
How i let myself go
I felt anger flush over me
Gave it the upper hand
I wanted to restrain but there was no way
I just dont understand
Now all i could say is Im sorry
But words take nothing back
I need to sustain my cool
And keep myself on track
Can no longer let locked up aggressions
Fight their way to surface
Its about maintaining stability and sanity
Moving at a slower pace
Their living their childhood not mine
Gotta let a kid be a kid
Dont let rage ruin their best years
Like for me my father did

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (35 / F-M / New York)
8-Aug-12 4:07 am
Very moving.

 

 

 
 
 loveembignsexy (15)    (44 / F-M / Indiana)
8-Aug-12 4:08 am
@IrishLove1988: ty babydoll

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (35 / F-M / New York)
8-Aug-12 4:11 am
Of course :)

 

 

 
 
 james85 
8-Aug-12 4:11 am
This is very good :)

 

 

 
 
 CALIFORNIADREAMIN ( / - / )
8-Aug-12 4:14 am
I storm had come far and wide.the whole world had to run and hide,no more luck,the well went dry.blackened clouds across the sky.thunder roared and lightning struck left and right,its time to duck,a dusty wind,a kansas twister,multiplied to twister sisters,the world was lost,dirt in the eyes,pain in the heart and hurt in the eyes,the storm of all storms has hit today,but i wish it'd go away

 

 

 
 
 loveembignsexy (15)    (44 / F-M / Indiana)
8-Aug-12 4:14 am
@james85: thank u

 

 

 
 
 bigd1993201111 (5)    (31 / M-F / New York)
8-Aug-12 4:20 am
Yaya my partna in crime can bust some rhymes lol

 

 

 
 
 loveembignsexy (15)    (44 / F-M / Indiana)
8-Aug-12 4:23 am
@bigd1993201111: lmao...thats whats up lone ranger! tonto has a lil bit of skills. i have more in my lil book too....this is one of my favorites tho

 

 

 
 
 bigd1993201111 (5)    (31 / M-F / New York)
8-Aug-12 4:36 am
@loveembignsexy: dam.n i never knew tonto had that hidden away. No wonder everytime we busted someone you pulled out that book hahaha. Here's a lil story for ya. I once had a partna who rode the hills;looking for those who didnt pay there bills; she'd shoot em bag em n tag em round em up and and saddle up till one day my partna met her match when she met a fella who bit back when she realized she had found her love he shot her down in cold blood though my partna stopped crime turns out the crime was love. Lol here's to you TONTO! Owow

 

 

 
 
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