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Watching as she leaves (by unwound)

 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
4-Aug-12 2:08 pm
I've seen her a time or two,a breath of fresh air,smile that lifts the gloom. I don't know her name,where she's from ,she must belong to another ,as I seen her about with him. Eyes that sparkle,her voice as soft as down. Casting her spell on me,I wish to hold her,but I can only watch her as she leaves.

 

 

 
 
 jetblack1982 (Banned)
4-Aug-12 2:21 pm
Well sir is like this look but don't touch!

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
5-Aug-12 5:12 am
@jetblack1982: pretty much....she's already spoken for

 

 

 
 
 Samcat1993 (2)  (31 / F-M / Saskatchewan)
10-Aug-12 1:37 am
Aww :) lucky lady

 

 

 
 
 poetdawn (2)   (39 / F-M / Indiana)
11-Aug-12 8:20 pm
Smile that lifts the gloom

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
14-Aug-12 1:37 am
@poetdawn: like that huh?

 

 

 
 
 Heartbrokenangel (11)    (30 / F-MF / New York)
4-Oct-12 1:30 am
Awe pretty and sad

 

 

 
 
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