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I Need Clarity Tonight (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
26-Jul-12 10:07 pm
Somewhere between
Giving up and raising hell.
I wanna throw a tantrum,
Really make a big scene.
But I’m just gonna sit back
And let it play out.
I can’t wait for it to begin,
But I just want it to be over.
My insides are conflicted,
And can’t make sense of anything.
Why is it that when I need clarity the most,
I lose sight of everything?
When I lay down to sleep tonight,
Maybe I will awake with the answers
On how to handle all my woes?
If only I could actually,
Sleep when I lay down tonight.
Tell me friends, where are the answers
To my problems?
All I need is a little clarity tonight.

 

 

 
 
 Cbguy (1)  (38 / M-F / North Carolina)
26-Jul-12 10:16 pm
Firsties!

 

 

 
 
 Leahrose 
26-Jul-12 10:17 pm
Lol that me 2 a tee lol ,bit embarrassed admitting lol

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
26-Jul-12 10:18 pm
@Cbguy: CONGRATS! you get a prize here it is :something you've always wanted:

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
26-Jul-12 10:19 pm
@Leahrose: :D it's okay to admit it, internal conflict is human nature, everyone has it!

 

 

 
 
 james85 
26-Jul-12 10:20 pm
@mrb89: im running out of superlatives for your poems. love it.

 

 

 
 
 Leahrose 
26-Jul-12 10:23 pm
Lol but my mind great los an can't find my way,i look out at the streets an watch the rain ,but all i c is my pain ,i left 2 wander theses ,that far as got at mo an it my 1 time wit poem ,even thou i tryin rite book ,yea i no pathetic attempt lol

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
26-Jul-12 10:25 pm
@james85: well gee thanks :)

 

 

 
 
 Leahrose 
26-Jul-12 10:28 pm
@James sorry i ad lil attempt at it but ,hey not really my thing lol

 

 

 
 
 Richard16 (1)    (31 / M-F / Ghana)
31-Jul-12 7:59 am
U are very good at this, keep it up

 

 

 
 
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