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Looking back (by james85)

 james85 
25-Jul-12 1:33 pm
When i was looking back i cried.
I seen what i'd already done.
The friendships i have forged.
I was just so happy.
I thought "i'm a man i shouldn't cry"
I questioned why i felt this way.
But i soon found my answer.
For i knew what i had done was just that special to me.
And will continue to be special forever.

 

 

 
 
 alynn 
25-Jul-12 1:46 pm
Very nice, James. It looks you're even getting better :) Thanks for sharing and keep it up!

 

 

 
 
 james85 
25-Jul-12 1:54 pm
@alynn: wow thank you! i didnt expect a "your getting better" comment which i really appricate, i think i posted some while you were off.

 

 

 
 
 Countryguy22 
25-Jul-12 1:56 pm
Yeah james, its not wrong 2 show ur emotions it just means u have a heart 2. It must feel really good that u have found so many friends online. Well good luck 4 the future as well.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
25-Jul-12 1:59 pm
@Countryguy22: wow, thank you sir, yeah i kinda wear my heart on my sleeve most of the time. And yes i am very happy to have such friends

 

 



Last edited by james85; 25-Jul-12 2:04 pm.
 
 
 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (31 / F-MF / Georgia)
25-Jul-12 6:28 pm
Awwwwww, I like it bro buddy c: Very good sir c:

 

 

 
 
 james85 
25-Jul-12 6:31 pm
Come on now sis bud, you have no need to call me sir lol but thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
25-Jul-12 6:33 pm
@james85: very nice! it's nice to see you putting more emotions into it, emotions (of the genuine kind) make the difference between this being a statement, and this being a poem. I like it :)

 

 

 
 
 james85 
25-Jul-12 6:37 pm
@mrb89: wow, praise from you really means a lot :) thanks a million

 

 

 
 
 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (31 / F-MF / Georgia)
25-Jul-12 6:40 pm
Lol, when I say sir to someone Im friends with its jokingly. Tsk, tsk, you should know better than to take me seriously lol. But I do LOVE it c:

 

 

 
 
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