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Holding me (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
27-Jun-12 8:44 pm
My mind tells my heart,
"You shouldn't be whole,"
but then I hear you whisper to me,
"I'm holding you
and I won't let go."

My tears flow freely down,
my emotions are raw,
but then you take my hand
and remind me
it is okay to fall.

You whisper to me,
"I'm holding tight to you
and I won't let go."

My pain shows on my face
and no one seems to see it
and just when it feels like
I can't take it anymore,
I hear you say,
"I'm holding you
and I won't let go."

 

 

 
 
 heikeva (69)   (60 / F-M / Bayern)
27-Jun-12 8:45 pm
;) as always i like it alot!!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
27-Jun-12 8:48 pm
Why thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 kowboy2477 
27-Jun-12 8:56 pm
Very nice!!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
27-Jun-12 8:57 pm
Thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 alynn 
24-Jul-12 1:00 pm
Really like this one!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
24-Jul-12 1:00 pm
Thanks :)

 

 

 
 
 TrueLoveSeeker 
24-Jul-12 5:16 pm
Nice. :)

 

 

 
 
 rayminton49 
24-Jul-12 5:23 pm
Very good.

 

 

 
 
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