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Part2 Tin roof and rain (by unwound)

 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
20-Jun-12 6:52 pm
Kate nestled down against me,finally our hearts regained a regular beat. Both of us smiling and content for the moment. "I thought you would never kiss me!" Kate nuzzled closer. " I thought about kissing you at least a thousand times,but never knew when I would." He replied looking down at her ,he remembered when she was just a spindly knock knee girl of ten,with freckles and red hair,he lost his heart that day,now ten years later he wasn't going back. "Well,I guess we better tell your dad,and I will find out if I still have a job." Kate giggled beside him" oh you let me worry about daddy" kate said as she placed a peck on his cheek.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
20-Jun-12 7:04 pm
This is really good!

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
20-Jun-12 7:07 pm
@james85: thank you sir

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
20-Jun-12 7:11 pm
James you should read the first half if you havent. @unbound it still is really good.

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
20-Jun-12 7:20 pm
@brats52005: thanks I'm glad you like it too,makes writing worthwhile

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
20-Jun-12 8:39 pm
I somehow missed part 1...had to go read it....it's good!

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
20-Jun-12 11:02 pm
@JLaDawn: thanks lady

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
20-Jun-12 11:11 pm

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
20-Jun-12 11:13 pm
@JLaDawn: ? ?

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
20-Jun-12 11:15 pm
@unwound: should have said.... your welcome sir lol

 

 

 
 
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