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My Dreams (by Acire)

 Acire 
20-Jun-12 4:58 pm
He walks in the shadows of my dreams. Not clear half hidden. I can run but cant catch up. I feel his eyes but turn to look as he turns away. Is it someone i know? Who is he... Some day... I'll know

 

 

 
 
 james85 
20-Jun-12 6:59 pm
Very nice great job!

 

 

 
 
 kowboy2477 
20-Jun-12 7:02 pm
:-) like it!!! Hope to see more......run rabbit run!!!!! :-)

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
20-Jun-12 7:04 pm
I like it.

 

 

 
 
 Acire73 
24-Jul-12 9:21 pm
I dont dream anymore that old smile has died felt like it got broken and locked deep inside jumped off a cliff with a man made of stone but got to the bottom and crashed, broken, alone i was missing a dream as i laid down last night but the illusion died as i turned out the light tomorrow is waiting its new and if i want it its mine not gonna settle for less than i want and if im alone im still fine

 

 

 
 
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