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Haunted memory (by donovan819)

 donovan819 
7-Dec-13 8:59 am
The night is cold as the air that blows through my heart. Your love is like a evil demon that haunts my memory each night in my dreams. Why can't I get over you i ve tried and tried? each time i think ive got this lovin you obession beat I see you out and about with your new love then i'm back on the ground again. I cant belive that you threw our love away just because you wanted to see what else what out their. I rember well you said that you loved me so much but I was your first sou you said goodbye so you could go play. So every night I come to this honky tonk hospital trying to get the medicine to numb the wounds you have inflicted upon me. It does me no good to tho just hung over and depressed. Some day the sun may shine upon me but not this day all i get this day is your haunted memory.

 

 

 
 
 diamondcc (6)   (48 / F-M / Georgia)
7-Dec-13 9:05 am
This is off topic but i need sum advice from n e 1 that can help me. I need sum advice on should i or shouldnt i marry this guy that im with but dont know if he is being true 2 me. Wat do i do.

 

 

 
 
 donovan819 
7-Dec-13 9:09 am
If he bein untrue don't do it but ya this is off topic but it ok I rekon

 

 

 
 
 diamondcc (6)   (48 / F-M / Georgia)
7-Dec-13 9:15 am
Thanks. Sorry 4 getting off topic but i dont know how 2 start a new thread cuz i barely get on here. Thanks again.

 

 

 
 
 donovan819 
7-Dec-13 9:19 am
Your welcome :)

 

 

 
 
 TenFour 
7-Dec-13 10:27 am
@donovan819: Sounds close to Hank Sr. I mean this next part as a joke: maybe you should add a drum solo just like Charlie Daniels does.

 

 

 
 
 donovan819 
7-Dec-13 10:30 am
Hank sr one my faves thank you hmm how bout fiddle and steel guitar

 

 

 
 
 leadonna (17)    (53 / F-M / Texas)
7-Dec-13 3:50 pm
I think u should add this. Since I am ur first, just know this. My wounds will heal and don't ever think ur gonna walk the path of my heart again. I deserve someone who wants true love as much as I do. First love is just that. There's gonna be a second. And a third and a fourth ..........

 

 

 
 
 donovan819 
8-Dec-13 2:34 am
@leadonna: why would I add what I did not write

 

 

 
 
 leadonna (17)    (53 / F-M / Texas)
8-Dec-13 2:54 am
For fun. U know what that is, right? Don't inbox me anymore.

 

 

 
 
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