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Back (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 4:51 am
With ever mile marker I pass,
I drive further from the shadows of my past.
With every winding road and sun-drenched path,
I find my way back:
back to who I am,
back to where I want to be.
Back to where I know I'm free.

Every small town I drive through,
is just another thing to put in my rear view.
So I put my windows down
I let the sunshine
and warm air swirl around me,
and I sing out loud
to every song on the radio,
knowing that I'm free again.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
20-Jun-12 10:03 am
Another great poem, have u entred poetry contests or anything like that? youd do really well! :)

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 4:18 pm
I probably would, but I haven't no lol

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
20-Jun-12 7:19 pm
I love this this is good. And expresses freedom.

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 7:27 pm
Thank you :)

 

 

 
 
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