Thread: Don't Bring Me Down Anymore

Don't Bring Me Down Anymore (by mrb89)

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mrb89
20-Jun-12 12:58 am

I sit in the same place I've always been,
somewhere between falling apart and okay.

I can't get the words you said outta my head,
they keep running around throwing punches in my mind

Every time I'm almost okay,
you come around and knock me back down.

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james85
20-Jun-12 1:01 am

I think this question has been asked before but where is the like button? lol. anyway great job once again! :)

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mrb89
20-Jun-12 1:03 am

>the like button is right here<
thank you! most of the ones I have been posting are actually older... and I have yet to get to any of my short stories... but then I have yet to share those with anyone so... :P

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heikeva (69)

(60 / F-M / Bayern)
20-Jun-12 1:15 am

@mrb89: And again ......i love it!!!!!!!!!! :)

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mrb89
20-Jun-12 1:19 am

Lol thank you :)
*takes a bow*
It honestly comes naturally to me to write...
and I am learning how to channel feelings into words that are actually not what I am feeling (does that make sense? I have ones I can show you if it doesn't lol)

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heikeva (69)

(60 / F-M / Bayern)
20-Jun-12 1:55 am

It makes sense 2 me...but i still like u 2 show me the other once i feel like the poems were written for me and my life........lol :)

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mrb89
20-Jun-12 1:57 am

Lol... well stick around I shall have more up soon :P

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heikeva (69)

(60 / F-M / Bayern)
20-Jun-12 1:58 am

That would b nice would love 2 read them....Thank u!!!!

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