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Two things (by james85)

 james85 
19-Jun-12 10:28 pm
Hi everyone heres my new poem its called two things:
They are very simple things in a persons life.
I havent had much joy in either but i am still strong.
Some may ask me shouldnt i wait?
I say i cant look back for i have people who now give me strength.
That is why once i have them i will finally know happiness.
There can be no buts, there can be no fear, there is no such word as can't.
My two things, they are very simple, i want them every day.

*the line "there is no such word as can't" was advice given to me by a good friend and person. :)

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
19-Jun-12 11:07 pm
Wow! Beautiful James ....

So true on this part : I cant look back for i have people now who give me strengths :) !

 

 

 
 
 james85 
19-Jun-12 11:49 pm
@Rainbowbutterfly: thanks rainbow, im just glad to be able to share these with you all.

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 12:14 am
Lovely, it's very sweet and simple :D

 

 

 
 
 james85 
20-Jun-12 12:22 am
@mrb89: thanks, i also posted the poem i wrote when i was 11 called summer is over and gone. :)

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 12:24 am
Must go back and look at it now :)
I am trying to decide what to post next, I have so many to choose from... makes it hard lol

 

 

 
 
 james85 
20-Jun-12 12:39 am
@mrb89: lol, what ever u choose im sure to enjoy as ive said i like poetry, it reminds me of my fav band, and when i was younger :)

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
20-Jun-12 12:44 am
You guys are so blessed! Keep it up ...:)

 

 

 
 
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