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The promise (by james85)

 james85 
27-Oct-13 9:35 pm
My latest short poem called the promise:
i came to you but you weren't there
i came to see you if only for a moment
i kept my promise to you
so when will you keep yours?
I'd do anything to hear from you again

 

 

 
 
 Gracie75 
27-Oct-13 9:38 pm
Very good :)

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn (11)   (50 / F-M / Oklahoma)
27-Oct-13 9:42 pm
It's sweet James...

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
27-Oct-13 9:47 pm
Very sweet

 

 

 
 
 ScorpionStar 
27-Oct-13 10:00 pm
Aws

 

 

 
 
 james85 
27-Oct-13 10:15 pm
Thanks everyone :)

 

 

 
 
 donovan819 
27-Oct-13 11:58 pm
Very good

 

 

 
 
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