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Heartbroken homecoming (by donovan819)

 donovan819 
27-Oct-13 2:01 am
Well I pulled in to ole Langley town lord knows how long its been since I seen home. I get out of the ole pickup and walk into the bar to escape the cold air it good to be home I think to my self as I take in the smoke and the smell of cheap booze. I belly up to the bar light a smoke and wait for the barkeep.well here you come girl lord knows time aint changed you at all. You give me a smile and a hug say it been far to long since last we saw eachother. You take my order a glass of Jim Beam as you pour the drink i think last I saw your face mine was coverd in tears from your goodbye. I ask why your workin in this dive you say the babies need fed and Johnnie got laid off from the factory. I drink a few more drinks play some old songs in the old Wurlitzer the crowd starts to fade away. I ask you to dance and you say yes as I hold you close to me those old feelins start coming back to me. Oh how i wanna kiss you but knowing better due to that gold band on your finger i hold my impulses in. Your perfume is intoxicating your embrace addictive but like a good line of cocaine I know better than to partake. finally the song has ended i roll one more smoke give you one last hug. walk out the door gettin in the pickup to go to mama s with tears in my eyes and George Strait on my ears I think it s a hell of a heartbrokken homecomin.

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
27-Oct-13 2:22 am
Sweet but kind of sad. Nice job.

 

 

 
 
 donovan819 
27-Oct-13 2:27 am
Thanku

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
27-Oct-13 2:28 am
No problem

 

 

 
 
 donovan819 
27-Oct-13 2:29 am
=}

 

 

 
 
 Gracie75 
27-Oct-13 2:37 am
Its sad but good, nice job

 

 

 
 
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