Thread: Longing... - Dating.mobi

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OneWitWonder
16-Oct-13 5:03 pm

I reach~It's just there
a shimmering never clear
A want so strong
it's for Love that I long
Once a discarded little girl
Love was just a lure
taunting me~a glimpse I can't know
A desire to reap what I sow
Now a woman through and through
still with dreams never outgrew
Passing out pieces of my heart
weary of not being a part
Wondering if life can go on
with so many pieces already gone
An ache still unhealed
or a fate fully sealed?

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james85
16-Oct-13 5:25 pm

@OneWitWonder: lovely poem la dawn :D

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OneWitWonder
17-Oct-13 2:35 am

@james85: thanks James

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mrb89
17-Oct-13 2:37 am

@OneWitWonder: I like it

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xSinneDx (21)

(42 / M-F / Arizona)
17-Oct-13 2:39 am

Awesome sauce

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donovan819
17-Oct-13 2:40 am

@OneWitWonder: I ll give it a a ten a mother.uckin ten

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ScorpionStar
17-Oct-13 2:45 am

Kool

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OneWitWonder
17-Oct-13 3:26 am

Thanks y'all!

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IndianDreamer
17-Oct-13 4:55 am

Made me feel what you are saying.. as always-I love your poetry:)

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im1made4u (22)

(55 / F-M / California)
17-Oct-13 10:30 am

It was very good

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