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Back To Me (by IndianDreamer)

 IndianDreamer 
28-Jun-13 4:53 pm
He looks at me with love in his eyes, like its true-his heart needs mine. We laugh and touch each other softly, skies are blue-everything is gonna be fine... Then a cloud fills with darkness, his eyes turn angry and gray. He doesnt believe I love him, no matter what I say. He questions who I am-dishonoring me with his words. Now the peaceful love we shared just seems unreal-absurd. Its got to stop now, no matter how sorry you claim to be...you will always be you-and I have to get back to being me.

 

 

 
 
 YouCantFixStupid 
28-Jun-13 5:02 pm
moving...

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
28-Jun-13 6:32 pm
Very very nice. I liked that

 

 

 
 
 jlee2310 (1)    (47 / M-F / Nevada)
28-Jun-13 6:41 pm
@IndianDreamer: that does not sound pleasent

 

 

 
 
 Martian 
28-Jun-13 10:46 pm
Glad I'm not like him

 

 

 
 
 IndianDreamer 
28-Jun-13 10:57 pm
Hey hes not all bad-remember the love in his eyes? lol seriously tho he has trust issues and a drinking problem-thats the only bad...but its got to be enough bad to make me let him go-it really is at this point...thats why I broke it off and came back on here-I need to be me again-the me that deserves better:) Thanks Ya'll for the compliments on my writing:)

 

 

 
 
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