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Ghost (by Rambler)

 Rambler 
24-Jun-13 2:44 am
I sit here beside you, yet I feel alone.
I talk with you, yet you do not hear me.
I look into your eyes, but you are looking eight through me.
I beg you to see me, plead with you to hear me.
But I am just a ghost in your mind.
I am invisible.
I am mute.
I am not even here beside you.
I truly am but a ghost.

 

 

 
 
 YouCantFixStupid 
24-Jun-13 2:46 am
Love this!

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
24-Jun-13 2:48 am
@YouCantFixStupid: thanks

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
24-Jun-13 2:56 am
Very nice!! I like

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
24-Jun-13 2:59 am
@Briteeyes: thanks, I have been reticant to put any of my poetry on here. I keep most of it for myself.

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
24-Jun-13 3:01 am
@Rambler: U should share more often...its good

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
24-Jun-13 3:03 am
@Briteeyes: I may do that. I had one typed out a couple weeks ago, but deleted it before I hit post.

 

 

 
 
 Poeticjustice65 
24-Jun-13 3:05 am
@Rambler: nice I like it

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
24-Jun-13 3:06 am
@Poeticjustice65: thanks

 

 

 
 
 Nhina (9)   (45 / F-MF / Philippines)
24-Jun-13 3:56 am
@Rambler: "I sit here beside you, yet I feel alone.
I talk with you, yet you do not hear me. "

Good writing :) Post more.

 

 

 
 
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