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The Journey (by alynn)

 alynn 
27-May-12 5:30 pm
I wander through walls with desperate attempt / In search of you. Gliding through vacant and taken rooms / Driven by the crave for your arms, solidly sturdy / And glistening as rippling stones. // I scan a thousand faces, but find no traces of you. / I cannot make out a glimpse of you / in other eyes. / Your face, I commit to memory / The faint flush of it, set with the sun / Always stirring, thrashing against walls, / Fluid through halls. // I find you rafting through rushing waves / Touch the air of your face, stilled / By my reflection embraced in your eyes. / You move me delicately through paths of shade and sunrise. // Now together, we beam at the lingering streams of light. / Finally connected to the haunted gasps of wind.

 

 

 
 
 AFunk 
27-May-12 5:36 pm
Thats very good!

 

 

 
 
 alynn 
27-May-12 6:35 pm
@AFunk: Thank You!

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
27-May-12 7:17 pm
I love it, its great.

 

 

 
 
 Xxxdonna1 (Banned)
27-May-12 7:44 pm
I think thats one of the best if not the best ive read on here

 

 

 
 
 763dan8578 
27-May-12 7:59 pm
I think i want to feel that! Thats awesome writing amber

 

 

 
 
 alynn 
28-May-12 4:07 pm
Thanks everyone! I really appreciate it. Y'all are just too sweet :)

 

 

 
 
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