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Living For Me Too (by JLaDawn)

 JLaDawn 
12-Apr-13 3:34 pm
As some of you dinos know I lost my sister, my dearest friend in a head on collision just before Thanksgiving last year. Her. Husband has not been functioning very well since her passing, my 18 yo niece wrote a poem and presented it to her dad recently on my sises birthday. It was truly a turning point in his grief. I am going to share it because it is just sooooo beautiful and may have meaning to anyone else that has lost a loved one......

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
12-Apr-13 3:43 pm
I sit up here in Heaven
And watch you waste your life
Wishing I could touch your face
And tell you it isn't right
Even though you cannot see me
I see you everyday
If only I could let you know
I never went away
I smile whenever you do
And everytime you shed a tear
I cry a little too
I hear you when you say you miss me
So I gently whisper it back to you
And when you think "I love you"
I feel it here times two
Please don't wish your life away
Or feel guilty when you laugh
Even though I wish that I was there
You know that I can't come back
You're not just living your life for you
You're living for me too
Then one day we'll be here together
Having both our dreams come true!


Racheal Spicer

 

 

 
 
 theatredrummer 
12-Apr-13 3:45 pm
I love that poem!!!!
I am truly sorry for your loss and I hope that you all can find some sort of comfort and closure.

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
12-Apr-13 4:13 pm
awe that's really sweet and beautiful!

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
12-Apr-13 4:13 pm
Thanks Drummer! I put this up with a couple of people in my mind, the first someone very near and dear to my heart that lost his child in an accident too and the second is Lola from bangkok, if you still lurk Lola I hope you read her words and are comforted by them.

 

 

 
 
 Otoobong (0)   (30 / M-MF / Nigeria)
12-Apr-13 4:20 pm
Am in love with that poem, am also sorry 4 her death......

 

 

 
 
 SockRockerMafiaPrincess 
12-Apr-13 4:23 pm
Awe that Gave me goose bumps, and it's beautiful

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
12-Apr-13 6:41 pm
@Otoobong, Meg and Jessi, thanks. I know I am biased, but I think she is an exeptionally talented writer!

 

 

 
 
 Sammy2 
12-Apr-13 7:06 pm
@JLaDawn: no youre not biased-made me cry! I always think of you and that person that lost a child among others I know who have been through such soul changing tragedy when I pray for acceptance and peace:) Bless you LaDawn!:)

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
12-Apr-13 8:03 pm
@Sammy2: awww thank you Tammy! Made me cry too....everytime I read it...

 

 

 
 
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