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UnReAl (once where i was (by Ty3b1l)

 Ty3b1l 
28-Mar-13 4:10 am
What is time? Am I an illusion? Sometimes I think so, but then comes the pain. Now I know I'm real, and I can feel the rain yeah i can feel the rain. So won't you stay for a cup of tea or a f*#k?,does'nt matter to me as long as you are here. I've gone blind from lookin at the answers to much. Almost lost all that mattered to me, so I'm all messed up in my own way. So won't you love me or cause me some? Won't you hug me or cause me some pain? So won't ya f*%k me or cause me some pain?!!! cause feeling like nothin makes it all seem UNREAL!!! And it makes makes me makes me feel said it makes me feel INSANE

 

 

 
 
 Yeiszha (17)    (36 / F-MF / Kuwait)
28-Mar-13 4:23 am
Is this a s0ng or u just write ups? . . . Cuz i n0ticed the meaning doesnt match to the lyrics, or line,@Ty3b1l:

 

 

 
 
 olive101 (6)   (51 / F-M / Nebraska)
28-Mar-13 4:30 am
Sad

 

 

 
 
 Ty3b1l 
28-Mar-13 4:33 am
@Yeiszha: howdy i guess its just a raw song poem or you could say it is what it is thanks for your opion it makes me think of more possibilties

 

 

 
 
 Yeiszha (17)    (36 / F-MF / Kuwait)
28-Mar-13 4:36 am
Keep it up, anyway if its s0ng its cool, espcialy if its rap or rnb. . .great, thanks 4 sharing it, .@Ty3b1l:

 

 

 
 
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