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Not sure what to call this. :) title ideas? (by RaenaM)

 RaenaM 
21-May-12 7:43 am
Piercing love held within...
Amber tears rain down on me...
This is my immortal sin...
Bathing me in eternity...
Fire fades and summer passes...
Ice cools the wintry nights...
Looking out behind thick lashes...
In my eyes reflects the lights...
Another day left to face...
An eternity of feelings...
Hoping one day to find my place...
Surrounded by fates devilish dealings...
Where do i belong...

 

 



Last edited by RaenaM; 21-May-12 7:45 am.
 
 
 realman2186 (1)    (38 / M-F / Ohio)
21-May-12 7:51 am
Call it where do i belong?

 

 

 
 
 Xxxdonna1 (Banned)
21-May-12 1:22 pm
Heartsong

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes1211 
21-May-12 5:26 pm
I like the where do i belong idea

 

 

 
 
 RaenaM 
22-May-12 6:38 am
Where do i belong sounds waaay to cliche tho.

 

 

 
 
 RaenaM 
22-May-12 6:39 am
And i like that title. What makes you call it heart song? @donna

 

 

 
 
 realman2186 (1)    (38 / M-F / Ohio)
22-May-12 6:41 am
Hmmm how about just "belong"

 

 

 
 
 MDragon 
22-May-12 7:03 am
I say where do i belong

 

 

 
 
 Xxxdonna1 (Banned)
22-May-12 5:17 pm
@reana, it seemed to come from your heart

 

 

 
 
 RaenaM 
22-May-12 5:31 pm
Good answer donna :) i think i just mite name it that lolz

 

 

 
 
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