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Tin roof and rain (by unwound)

 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
17-May-12 6:57 pm
It was another hot summer day,hardly a breeze had stirred as I drove another post in the ground,wiping my forehead of the sweat running down and stinging my eyes,I was wishing for cool drink of water,having drank the last at lunchtime. Watching the clouds overhead,darkening by the minute,hearing a distant rumble from the west,looking like I wasn't going have much longer before I got soaked,still having another quarter mile of fence to build. " Hello" a sweet voice called from behind me,mumbling under my breath,realizing it was kate,the bosses daughter. All legs curly red hair ,everything about her irresistable .She was packing a jug of water,a miracle ,and sending an angel of mercy no doubt. " looks like you could use a drink" kate smiled that smile,mischevious and sweet,as I took it from her a few sprinkles touch my shoulder. "Thank you,guess I better pack it in,we are going to get drenched." Just as I said,the rain came at once in long curtains. Grabbing kates hand I made a dash for the old barn a few hundred yards away. Entering the barn I grabbed an old feed bag to dry off some,and handing kate one too. " well I guess we are going to have to wait it out here for awhile." I said settling down on a pile of straw. "I don't mind ,as long as I'm with you!" Kate cast a hinting smile my way,as she stroked my chest,sending tiny fingers of fire through my body ,unbearable I could no longer control what I was about to do,but the rain and old tin roof hastened my desires for that red haired beauty kate.

 

 



Last edited by unwound; 17-May-12 7:21 pm.
 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
17-May-12 7:46 pm
Very very good. If you right like this you should become a romance writer. If you arent already.

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
17-May-12 9:09 pm
@brats52005: I'm trying to be a writer,got 7 books ,not published yet.:-\

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
18-May-12 12:23 am
Sorry to here that your good just keep trying.

 

 

 
 
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