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The answer!!! (by patrickwenner3)

 patrickwenner3 (Banned)
1-Feb-13 7:25 pm
"I am a fool,
when i wish i was cool.
I want to avoid,
that feeling of void.
The answer to life,
is not in this strife.
It seems rather odd,
that the answer is God.
He gives not a care,
too heavy to bear.
He gives us his strength,
to the longest of length.
He lends us his power,
in the darkest of hours.
He sends us his love,
that rains down from above.
He sends us his grace,
as He fills our place.
Let us never forget,
that we never regret,
the work God has done for us.

Written By; Patrickwenner3. 4/29/2012"

 

 

 
 
 patrickwenner3 (Banned)
1-Feb-13 7:26 pm
Just thought I would share. This was totally me at the time I wrote it.

 

 

 
 
 Nzsweetie24 (4)    (36 / F-M / New Zealand)
1-Feb-13 7:27 pm
@patrickwenner3: Thats really amazing. :-) and so true!

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
1-Feb-13 7:29 pm
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 DragonMaster7719 
1-Feb-13 7:36 pm
@brats52005: hi brats :) would you message me? you may want too.

*kick*
YIPE!

 

 

 
 
 DragonMaster7719 
1-Feb-13 7:43 pm
@brats52005: ya gotta undo your restrictions :P

 

 

 
 
 patrickwenner3 (Banned)
1-Feb-13 7:44 pm
@brats52005: hi brats :) would you message me? you may want too.

*kick*
YIPE!
rule #8 no thread hijacking. Thanks. ;)

 

 

 
 
 DragonMaster7719 
1-Feb-13 7:45 pm
@patrickwenner3: my bad dude.... good writing tho!

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
1-Feb-13 7:45 pm
@brats52005: ya gotta undo your restrictions :P
I just did.

 

 

 
 
 patrickwenner3 (Banned)
1-Feb-13 7:48 pm
@patrickwenner3: my bad dude.... good writing tho!
thanks. And no problem.

 

 



Last edited by patrickwenner3; 1-Feb-13 7:48 pm.
 
 
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