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Today (by Nzsweetie24)

 Nzsweetie24 (4)    (37 / F-M / New Zealand)
25-Jan-13 3:36 pm
Someone is crying,
they've lost someone they love,
are unable to understand why this had to happen.

Someone is smiling,
they've had a new arrival,
are unable to understand how anyon could be sad.

Someone has a broken heart,
they've lost all they had,
are unable to understand how this came to pass.

Someone's eyes are shining,
they've found someone to love,
are unable to understand what could happen.

Someone nods their head,
they finally undestand that this is all a part of life,
are embarassed to find,
the answer was there before them all along.

- Me -

 

 

 
 
 ganty (6)    (32 / F-M / Kenya)
25-Jan-13 4:03 pm
awsome poem dear!! (noding my head) pple change n things go wrong but all in all life has to go on

 

 

 
 
 Nzsweetie24 (4)    (37 / F-M / New Zealand)
25-Jan-13 4:05 pm
awsome poem dear!! (noding my head) pple change n things go wrong but all in all life has to go on
Glad you liked it and thank you :-) yes, that was what i was hoping people would get from reading it

 

 



Last edited by Nzsweetie24; 25-Jan-13 4:06 pm.
 
 
 Crazybutterfly 
25-Jan-13 4:35 pm
nice

 

 

 
 
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