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Your Lips (by JLaDawn)

 JLaDawn 
10-Jan-13 7:23 pm
Your lips breathe life into mine,
They are my nourishment,
They are my Glory,
I live for their touch,
Their gentle majesty,
Every dream I dared dreamed,
Lay within them,
My desires,
My hope,
My today,
My tomorrow,
My always,
Held captive in your lips,
They are my reasons,
They're the very definition of sensuality,
And when you smile,
The sun hides in shame,
And the heavens weep for their glory,
Always and forever,
MY world,
In YOUR lips!

 

 

 
 
 hillbilly1962 
10-Jan-13 7:33 pm
Wow, Nice! Wish and hope

 

 

 
 
 Stephenem 
10-Jan-13 8:05 pm
This is superlative. But, whose lips were you talking about? Tell us his name and celebrate him here lol

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
10-Jan-13 8:26 pm
Wow very beautiful. encore you always write so good. You, mrb and haze are my favorites you all write beautiful stuff love seeing them all.

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
10-Jan-13 9:27 pm
Ahhhhh thanks brats n hillbilly! And my lips r sealed stephen...

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
12-Feb-13 6:35 pm
I love this one too.

 

 

 
 
 YouCantFixStupid 
25-Jun-13 2:06 pm
This one?

 

 

 
 
 Singhpk (27)      (44 / M-F / Uttar Pradesh)
25-Jun-13 2:25 pm
Beautifully written
praiseworthy :-)

 

 

 
 
 YouCantFixStupid 
25-Jun-13 2:46 pm
@Singhpk: Thank you my friend, that was sweet.

 

 

 
 
 LonelyAngel2 (14)    (50 / F-M / Tennessee)
25-Jun-13 4:18 pm
Wow. This is so beautiful. Wish I could write like this.

 

 

 
 
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