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Show me the way (by JLaDawn)

 JLaDawn 
3-Jan-13 3:48 am
Someone take this hand
And lead it back to Joy,
Walk with ease
And show me the way,
Give me hope in the darkness that surrounds,
Tell me lil lies,
And only whisper the truth
That I am scared to hear,
Be the breath that I can't take
With this weight on my chest,
Be the strength I need
And show me the way....back home!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
3-Jan-13 3:55 am
very nice!

 

 

 
 
 hillbilly1962 
3-Jan-13 3:57 am
@JLaDawn: Have you ever read the poem, "Footprints"? By the way, nicely put!

 

 

 
 
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