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Mirror Girl (by IrishLove1988)

 IrishLove1988 (18)    (35 / F-M / New York)
28-Apr-12 2:41 am
Who is that girl, that my mirror reflects?
Sad golden eyes, with liquid green flecks.
Who is that girl, staring me down?
Seeing right through me, to the shadows below.
She calls to me, begging me to let her in.
But I'm afraid, scared to let down the walls, and to be hurt again.
Pain is radiated through her eyes, and her lips.
From head to toe, dripping from her fingertips.
The girl in the mirror, she has seen trauma.
She has known heartbreak, sadness, and drama.
Cascading through life, without ever seeing...
She was alone when her heart started beating.
Who is that girl, that my mirror reflects?
Sad golden eyes, with liquid green flecks...
It took me forever, lifetimes, to see...
That girl in the mirror... That girl is me.


Just a glimpse into my world of writing and poetry. Hope you all enjoy reading it...

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
28-Apr-12 2:48 am
@IrishLove1988: words escape me....sooo moving...

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (35 / F-M / New York)
28-Apr-12 3:00 am
@LaDawn1974: Thank you :) I appreciate that. I wrote this at a very difficult point in my life, so it's nice to have someone appreciate the feelings behind it.

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
28-Apr-12 3:06 am
@IrishLove1988: i appreciate and relate!

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (35 / F-M / New York)
28-Apr-12 3:18 am
@LaDawn1974: That's what I love about writing... You can touch so many with so few words.

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
28-Apr-12 3:56 am
That was wonderful.

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (35 / F-M / New York)
28-Apr-12 4:11 am
@brats52005: Thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
28-Apr-12 1:38 pm
Very good,amazing to say the least

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
28-Apr-12 2:03 pm
Wow! That was full of emotions and truly moving &

I like the "Who is that girl ". I remembered Mulan Disney movie.. Thumbs up girl :)

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (35 / F-M / New York)
28-Apr-12 7:02 pm
@unwound: Thank you very much :)

 

 

 
 
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