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Poetry (by lashea22)

 lashea22 (0)  (37 / F-M / Florida)
10-Mar-12 12:09 am
Who enjoys writing poems? Where is the keeper of my heart, the light that guides me back to where you are.

 

 

 
 
 OzzyOzborn 
12-Mar-12 10:09 am
He's nowhere to be found, he left without a sound, yet he'll back around, he's obsessed with your mound :)
But seriously, poetry allows a level of communication that no other written word can attain

 

 

 
 
 Thanx4memory (0)   (42 / M-F / England)
13-Mar-12 5:03 am
This will look crap because i cant start new lines on this phone. But here goes............SEASONS LOVE The joy of spring when you look at me, like a glistening sunset by the sea. I feel newly born with your touch, there's nothing else i love so much. Sunny smiles on a summers day, heated passion felt in every way. Warmth in my heart when i see you, fire in my soul from your love so true. the autumn leaves the colour of your hair, highlighting your skin so smooth and fair. A walk with you under the evening sky, makes me feel that i could run and fly. winter frost in your blue eyes, an icy smile under the skies. The chilling breeze through your hair, all make me freeze under your stare. i could spend my years looking at you, you make me smile with all you do. My knees go weak when you talk to me, the thought of your love sets my soul free. ######copyright is mine so please ask, if you dont, i'll kick your ass.

 

 



Last edited by Thanx4memory; 13-Mar-12 5:29 am.
 
 
 OzzyOzborn 
13-Mar-12 5:22 am
That poem is good, held true through time,
but the last little bit, just doesnt rhyme

 

 

 
 
 Thanx4memory (0)   (42 / M-F / England)
13-Mar-12 5:32 am
There you go, lo and behold. A quick edit and problem solved.

 

 

 
 
 OzzyOzborn 
13-Mar-12 10:43 am
Hehe, good one :)

 

 

 
 
 JCSMTG 
13-Mar-12 3:02 pm
Only poetry i know is bathroom poetry =/

 

 

 
 
 All4u1986 (0)  (37 / M-F / Indiana)
19-Mar-12 7:34 pm
Love is like a blunt once it gos out you can always relight it but it never tastes the same

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (55 / M-F / Missouri)
20-Mar-12 8:18 pm
Some some so profane,write these words ,all the same,over and over words the same,prose so cliche,frost i am not ,shakespheare hides in shame,with thy pen i leave no name. Nemo i am as i remain,refraining restraining not to utter another word

 

 

 
 
 SassyOak23 
23-Mar-12 12:00 am
@JCSMTG: what the hell is bathroom poetry??

 

 

 
 
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