A friend has asked me to place his poem here from a site, yay! This is a good duty and I am glad I can do this for that person. Anyways, Imma poll it. Hey, I like to have a little fun lol So, hope you all enjoy reading it. btw, as simple as it seems I had to actually ask about its meaning. Let me know if you can get the meaning of it. After getting responses, I will ask that friend if I can tell it cause it's burning my tongue lmao

Leaving home (Friend)

Leaving home, I wonder when,
If I am to be home again.
The road is long, the years go by,
a tear drop rushes from my eye.
To see his face, to hear his voice,
I'm sorry, Dad, it was my choice.
Years are long and memories fade,
I want you to see the life I've made.
I hear his cries, I come to see,
I feel I'm you, when that was me.
I only hope He'll love me, too,
just the way that I love you.
If you could see him, you'd agree,
that little face is you and me.
Leaving home, I wonder when,
if I will ever hear your voice again.

@JustMeAndYou77: it is a very good poem, it invokes some nice images and emotions... I think I might kinda see what it's about, but shall wait to see what others think.

Thanks for taking a peek at it mrb. You are great with poetry and creative writing so I can't wait to see your input!

Awe that was great. A child to a father. We always wonder and want our parents to see are choices in life and most times we have to do them alone. Very touching.

Thank you so much brats! :) You really come close because, yes, the relationship is between a father and son as well as our choices in life. There is also a deeper surprise in it though.

i voted.... yay!

That iswas very very good, caught my attention

Thank you Paul and nope, lol. You can not explain the poem either. You like mrb are good at creative writing and poetry so you've got to wait a bit!

Hi Briteeyes, thank you...:)) How would you describe the poem from what you have read? Have you gathered any more from it?