Thread: My poem - Dating.mobi

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(31 / F-M / Maine)
11-Dec-12 1:46 am

My heart is surrounded by a black raven
Sometimes I forget who I am for what I've become
Around everyone else
Perfection
On my own
Tears roll down my Snow White cheeks
Tomorrow will come but nothing will change
Memories overflow in my heart and soul
Who I am isn't who I want to be
I've turned into a monster
...
Where is that little girl that I use to be
I'm creating my own black abyss to hide who I am
I have to make a stand but if I do I will only fall
The tears I've cried
The chuckles I've laughed
The bones I've broken
The hearts I've torn
I can't be anyone else
I'm not perfect
I'm not a hero
I'm not a rose
I'm not a blooming flower
I am imperfect
I am a victim
I am a thorn
I am the ashes left behind

bigred1219
11-Dec-12 1:52 am

Nice. I got a friend that would love that.

JLaDawn
11-Dec-12 1:56 am

Awesome!

butterfly6577
11-Dec-12 2:02 am

Very nice

brats52005 (52)

(53 / F-M / California)
11-Dec-12 9:42 am

that is a great poem. I really love it.

james85
11-Dec-12 10:58 am

this is really good!

AwkwardPandaSneeze (3)

(31 / F-M / Maine)
11-Dec-12 11:00 pm

Thanks ^\\\^

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