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My Sister (by JLaDawn)

 JLaDawn 
12-Nov-12 6:54 pm
We grew up together
Two as one
We were the oldest of many
But closer were none
Our lives so tightly entwined
No thread to unravel is there to find
Sometimes we traveled a different route
But of your place in my heart there is no doubt
We fought and made up, our relationship bittersweet
My hope remained that once again our roads would meet
We were "the Dawn and the Danyelle"
So many memories of us raising hell
Although my life will continue to go on
Too early, your journey is done
I love you my sister, my friend
My life wont be complete till we are together again.

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (35 / F-M / New York)
12-Nov-12 6:56 pm
LaDawn, I was so sorry to hear about your sister. I can't even begin to imagine the pain you are in. My sincere condolences to you and your family. May she RIP.

 

 

 
 
 Marlee81 (10)    (42 / F-M / Missouri)
12-Nov-12 7:05 pm
Beautifully written. Many prayers to you and your family. So very sorry to hear about your loss. :(

 

 

 
 
 VELVETVEGA 
12-Nov-12 7:09 pm
So very sorry to hear about your loss. My love and condolences to you and your family

 

 

 
 
 CallMeMaybe 
12-Nov-12 7:30 pm
Im so sorry to hear about your sister LaDawn - *Hugs* and Prayers all the way from New Zealand..

 

 

 
 
 sluttybuddy69 
12-Nov-12 7:30 pm
@JLaDawn: thats soo sad!!! but true...i know whats its like.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
12-Nov-12 7:41 pm
@JLaDawn: this is such a beautiful poem. thoughts and prayers go to you and your family during this hard time.

 

 

 
 
 bigmomma19 
12-Nov-12 10:34 pm
A beautiful tribute. I am so sorry for your loss.

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
13-Nov-12 12:10 am
Thank y'all!

 

 

 
 
 Goodguy29 (2)   (38 / M-F / New Jersey)
13-Nov-12 5:25 am
That poem brought tears to my eyes ladawn she is with god. I'm so sorry for the loss of your sister may god bless you.

 

 

 
 
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