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Lost (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
10-Nov-12 6:14 am
Okay here is my first challenge post,
you gave me the word 'lost' here is what I got out of it (:
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Lost,
I wonder.
Aimless,
I roam.
My path,
Unseen.
My past
Behind me.
My future
Before me
Yet the mirror clearly
Shows me that
My future is
Slowly becoming
My past.
And still
I am lost.
Wondering,
I know not
Where I go.
Now,
Now I am
Lost.
Lost in life,
Trying to find
Myself.
Lost in the sea
Of unknown.

 

 

 
 
 insayshable87 
10-Nov-12 6:17 am
We need a "like" button (:

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
10-Nov-12 6:17 am
@mrb89: .........bravo!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
10-Nov-12 6:18 am
We need a "like" button (:
lol. yea we do, an thanks

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
10-Nov-12 6:19 am
@PaulG7719: thank ya....

 

 

 
 
 nightowl3737 
10-Nov-12 6:26 am
you rock,very nicely said!!!!

 

 

 
 
 jakemann23 (9)   (35 / M-F / Illinois)
10-Nov-12 6:28 am
very good! im glad i gave u the topic idea very splendid indeed

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
10-Nov-12 6:31 am
@nightowl3737: thank ya kindly :)

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
10-Nov-12 6:32 am
very good! im glad i gave u the topic idea very splendid indeed
thank you for givin it to me, feel free to give me some more :)

 

 

 
 
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