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I wrote a short one this time (by PaulG7719)

 PaulG7719 
9-Nov-12 5:46 am
as i lay there on the grass, under the shade of an old oak tree, i heard the faint whisper of a woman sobbing. curiosity called to me as i arose to find the source. i happened upon a well and the sobbing seemed to emenate from within. in a panic i grabbed the rope attached to the side and tossed it down. "grab on" i yelled! "thank you" i heard a voice reply. i pulled on the rope but couldnt budge it. i pulled harder and harder, still unable to lift. suddenly i felt a tug. as i struggled to pull, another tug overpowered me and dragged me into the well! as i fell, i saw a light that brightened with the descent. as i passed through the light, i saw you crying. "how did you get into this well honey?" i asked. "well?" you said, face stained with tears. "youre not it in a well paul. youre in a hospital, and youve come back to me!"

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
9-Nov-12 5:48 am
Awwwww!!!!!!

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
9-Nov-12 5:49 am
That would be a great preface to a wonderful love story to unfold!

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
9-Nov-12 5:50 am
@JLaDawn: not as creative i know lol.

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
9-Nov-12 5:51 am
I think it is....left me wanting to know their story...

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
9-Nov-12 5:54 am
lol i decided to keep some mystery to it. thats just good writing

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
9-Nov-12 5:59 am
Lol....leave em wanting more eh?

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
9-Nov-12 6:14 am
@JLaDawn: thats right lol. i actually wrote a short poem about how i saw my son as myself and me as my father. i submitted it to poetry.com and won 1st place.

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
9-Nov-12 6:14 am
So post your prize-winner for us? Pls? And congratulations!!!

 

 

 
 
 Mobifren (2)   (40 / F-MF / Philippines)
9-Nov-12 6:15 am
i give u a clap clap for that

 

 

 
 
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