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The Dance (by Gator8282)

 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
8-Nov-12 4:30 am
We dance through the night, a soft carress here, a light touch there... It feels so right. Its almost more then I can bear... In the end she holds me close, and I can no longer breathe. She has the scent of a rose. I whisper in her ear do you love me?... She pulls my ear to her lips, They brush gently and it starts to take it toll, I grab her beautiful his, I pull her close as she whispers " With all my soul!"... How I long to go back to that night. But it is gone, I can not live in the past, I will once again find a light... So into the river once again my line is cast!!!

 

 

 
 
 nikki1989 
8-Nov-12 4:42 am
wow :)

 

 

 
 
 xSinneDx (21)    (42 / M-F / Arizona)
8-Nov-12 4:44 am
Im glad i didnt know....the way it all would end....the way it would go..our lives are better left to chance... i coulda missed the pain but i a had to miss the dance..........garth brooks

 

 

 
 
 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
8-Nov-12 4:52 am
Sorry i see I got a error on one part where I wrote her beautiful his should read her beautiful hip... once again sorry for the error

 

 

 
 
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