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Seasons Come and Go (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
22-Oct-12 5:18 am
I love the colors on the tress
And how they change,
From green,
To red,
Orange and
Yellow,
Finally to brown,
Right before they fall to the ground.
Leaving the branches bare
And exposed.

I love the weather
As it cools down,
From t-shirts,
To hoodies
To sweatshirts
And flannel things.

I like the shift from the summer heat,
That turns to chilly nights,
That becomes snow falling.

I love hot coco,
Fireplaces puffing smoke.
There are turkeys,
Parades,
Family gatherings
And football.

Honestly?
And I love it all.
The shift from summer,
To fall,
And onto winter.

 

 

 
 
 vinnie612 
22-Oct-12 5:21 am
another good un and totaly agree love the fall

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
22-Oct-12 5:22 am
@vinnie612: thanks ya. It's my favorite season :D

 

 

 
 
 OFWGKTA (13)    (29 / F-M / Florida)
22-Oct-12 5:26 am
Oh soo true & this 1 is now officially a fave. :) great.

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
22-Oct-12 5:30 am
@OFWGKTA: awe thank you. :)

 

 

 
 
 vinnie612 
22-Oct-12 5:33 am
@mrb89: mine 2

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
22-Oct-12 5:37 am
@vinnie612: remind me to get a pic from the top of the mountain to show off how breathtakingly amazing the seasonal change looks right now.... I'll send ya a copy :P

 

 

 
 
 james85 
22-Oct-12 4:34 pm
@mrb89: love this poem, can i have that pic too? if you can :D

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
22-Oct-12 4:36 pm
@james85: thank you :) sure, I'll get it to ya as well

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
22-Oct-12 5:03 pm
Just wanted to say mrb that I have been a lil distracted and am just now getting around to telling you how amazing I think ALL your poems are...sorry it took me so long but consider this post a thumbs up on all the rest that I didn't comment on becuz i read and loved everyone!

 

 

 
 
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