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Rising Above (by JLaDawn)

 JLaDawn 
16-Aug-12 2:36 am
It's high time a lesson was taught,
I need to change everthing u thought,
You were never really our father,
I am the shepard of this flock,
So if u come creeping listen for my gun to c*ck,
If ever again ur fists make my loved ones cry,
Then one of us will have to die,
I tried to do good~tried to be nice,
F*ck with me one more time and pay the price,
Live ur miserable life and leave us alone,
Raise my ire and I'm cutting bone,
This is ur last warning,
For now my rage is storming,
So hide in ur pathetic little den,
But as for me and mine~we are saying when!

 

 



Last edited by JLaDawn; 16-Aug-12 2:48 am.
 
 
 MrRamtasticAkaRam318 
16-Aug-12 2:46 am
Powerful

 

 

 
 
 Landen20 (0)   (32 / M-F / Texas)
16-Aug-12 3:49 am
Nice u should be on my cd

 

 

 
 
 Estarley77 
16-Aug-12 4:13 am
Wow i love that i applaud you :)

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
16-Aug-12 1:50 pm
Thanx y'all

 

 

 
 
 heikeva (69)   (61 / F-M / Bayern)
16-Aug-12 2:03 pm
Great and like Ram said very powerfull .....kinda scary if u r that other person! ;)

 

 

 
 
 vinnie612 
16-Aug-12 2:19 pm
Very great

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
17-Aug-12 7:18 am
Thanx Heike and Vinnie!

 

 

 
 
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