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Try this one. lmao (by April666)
All you fake a** punk think you can rap.
Try this one for size, merge your empty gap.
You see the difference between mine & yours.
Mine opens your minds doors.
Music with a beat.
Sure.. brings you to your feet.
Wheres the meaning behind your song.
You want some originality it dont take long.
Keep "busting" out or fake a** rymes.
Soon youll crash to your demise.
Now darlin please quit trying to play.
Cause this right here is all I have to say.
It dont take a genuis to do what you do.
Looky here I can play to!
So keep hitting them fake ass beats as you say.
Cause I think ive done beaten you today.
Try this one for size, merge your empty gap.
You see the difference between mine & yours.
Mine opens your minds doors.
Music with a beat.
Sure.. brings you to your feet.
Wheres the meaning behind your song.
You want some originality it dont take long.
Keep "busting" out or fake a** rymes.
Soon youll crash to your demise.
Now darlin please quit trying to play.
Cause this right here is all I have to say.
It dont take a genuis to do what you do.
Looky here I can play to!
So keep hitting them fake ass beats as you say.
Cause I think ive done beaten you today.
(32 / M-F / New York)The last like 4 lines were okay. Hahaha. Im a metal head. I just wanted to see if I could do better than the other people "bustin rymes" as they say. Lmao.
@April666: haha i dont care for rap i like my classic rock and metal but i just read ur other one! Excellent. Haha you got talent girl. I wrote one for bignsexy last nite that i didnt think was to bad haha
Your the rebel type chip that puts it down,i can respect that
@CALIFORNIADREAMIN: I was tryin to punk you. But just playing of course. I dont get rap. Lol
The other one was written w/ metal in mind... something like Gojira
Last edited by April666; 9-Aug-12 6:31 am.
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