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POEM (open to title suggestions) (by alynn)
It took her off guard, by surprise / Not recognizing the boulder pulled before her eyes. / And she slept inside days spent staring into her own mind / Not recalling his face, in the background mists of her mirror. // She built a glass case for you, wrapped in silken cloths; Not allowing the pieces of herself to leak out. / And maybe with this Love, or some "fill-in" canned seed can sprout through tattered pieces / of a long lost soul. // I only felt the kisses you lent; the soft release and sighs rolling off your lips / The sweet mournings of honeysuckle and blinding sun, cuddled up and in afternoon bliss / But somehow I lost you, in my lone red midnight thoughts. // She once numbed her body whole / Taking pieces of broken glass from the rotting parts of herself. / And with one muffled scream and deep sigh, released herself to the fall. / She never felt the blow.
Sorry if the slashes get on y'alls nerves lol, I can't do that spacing and line skipping from my phone -.-
Sorry i cant really give you a title for this lol, but this is really good, good to see you back again! 

@brats52005: Thanks so much :) James: I appreciate the warm welcome, thank you. And that's okay about the title lol. Titles are really hard to come up with. Coming up with a name for a poem is ten times harder than writing the actual poem sometimes lol.
Thats beautiful and the only thing i can think of is the word missing :)
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