My ecstasy and my thoughts do fuse, Having fallen for my lover's ruse. I awaken to a soul deep bruise, my offered body they did abuse. Where were the words I so long to hear, Where were the kisses behind the ear, Where was the touch that I hold so dear, Where was the passion, all gone I fear. I sensed the heat rising from within. I felt her presence upon my skin, I heard her loud moans above the din... Yet her attachment was razor thin. Often now the encounter's hollow. Disillusioned in my heart, I know separation is the status quo. Decisions circle about my head, Do I allow myself to be led. By empty words too often said, To the loneliness of my own bed!!!

@Gator8282: Wow! Did you just write that?

Hmm, I like the words. But it's kind of a jumbled mess though. It has no breaks, just punctuation. Which takes away from it being a poem, as line breaks are what make a poem, a poem. And it's not a story, so I'm not sure what to call it. But as I said I like the words.

@mrb89: Idk....the version I found on the internet, from 2011, has some differences....

"" USED
My ecstasy and my thoughts do
fuse
Having fallen for my lover’s ruse
I awaken to a soul deep bruise
My offered body they did abuse
Where were the words I so long to
hear
Where were the kisses behind the
ear
Where was the touch that I hold so
dear
Where was the passion, all gone I
fear
I sensed the heat rising from within
I felt their presence upon my skin
I heard their loud moans above the
din
Yet their attachment was razor thin
Often now the encounter’s hollow
Then distress and regret soon
follow
Disillusioned in my heart I know
Separation is the status quo
Decisions circle about my head
Do I allow myself to be led
By empty words too often said
To the loneliness of my own bed
Tell me again in an honest gust
That I’m an object of love not lust
Bring back the delight, bring back
the trust
I expect commitment that is a must""

Link.

huh
and that's also clearly a poem, see the line breaks are what make the words flow and the thoughts being presented look better imo

BUSTED! Lol-I KNEW it especially when Walks commented on it! Sorry Rich but it seemed against your nature to praise poetry...

Heyyyy Im offended! I know poetry!!

Rosed are red

Violets are blue

Im having a toddy

How about you?! ;-)

@WalkSoftly: Lmao! Hey I have seen that somewhere...did you just make that up? My version is Roses are red Bacon is brown...mmmmmmm bacon...... ;) lol:)

@WalkSoftly: ya its a old one of mine

@mrb89: I cant do it on this cheap phone