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The moment I fell. (by Rambler)

 Rambler 
22-Nov-13 2:46 am
It wasn't the day when I first saw your face.
It wasn't the moment I first heard your name.
It wasn't the first time I heard you speak.
It wasn't the first time I looked into your eyes.
It wasn't the first time our hands touched.
It wasn't the first time we made passionate love.
It wasn't the first kiss nor indeed the first hug.
It was when you said I love you, that you stole my heart.

 

 

 
 
 Gracie75 
22-Nov-13 10:37 am
Nice

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
22-Nov-13 12:46 pm
@Gracie75: thanks

 

 

 
 
 Gracie75 
22-Nov-13 12:47 pm
@Rambler: welcome

 

 

 
 
 xlace75x 
22-Apr-14 3:48 am
Dammit

 

 

 
 
 sweeterthejuic3 
22-Apr-14 4:02 am
@xlace75x: bad memories?

 

 

 
 
 xlace75x 
22-Apr-14 4:05 am
@xlace75x: bad memories?
yea you can say that

 

 

 
 
 sweeterthejuic3 
22-Apr-14 4:07 am
@xlace75x: :(

 

 

 
 
 xlace75x 
22-Apr-14 4:12 am
@sweeterthejuic3: its ok just stung alittle when i seen it

 

 

 
 
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