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Schattered Heart Again (by sexybunny63)

 sexybunny63 
28-Mar-14 10:50 am
Tried so hard.
I tried my best.
I gave you my all,
and now there's nothing left.

You stole my heart,
then tore it in two.
Now I'm falling apart,
and don't know what to do.

Divided by decisions,
burned by the fire.
Confused by your words.
Tempted by desire.

I'm living in the present.
My mind is on the past.
Not knowing what I'll lose.
Not knowing what will last.

Blinded by fear.
Drowning in doubt.
Struggling to be free.
Looking for a way out.

 

 

 
 
 tat2d1976 (12)    (48 / M-F / North Carolina)
28-Mar-14 1:04 pm
I like it!

 

 

 
 
 hispeedrodeo 
28-Mar-14 2:20 pm
Thumbs up

 

 

 
 
 sexybunny63 
28-Mar-14 2:33 pm
Thx

 

 

 
 
 geffnyp 
28-Mar-14 2:51 pm
Wonderful expression, I love the way you use rythm to emphasise the deapths and magnitude, someone must have hurt you real bad, just be strong for your kids, your prince will come to you, and treat you right.

 

 

 
 
 sexybunny63 
28-Mar-14 2:58 pm
@geffnyp: I was and thx

 

 

 
 
 geffnyp 
28-Mar-14 3:22 pm
@sexybunny63: you just need to select ur men in more careful way. u need to develop a keen eye for full commitment especially to your kids. I say this coz iv been a victim of single parenthood in a family with five brothers and its not a walk in the park to make ends meet. I saw my mother get crushed over and over again, trying to make ends meet, while I could do nothing back then, I know what you must be going through. sorry about the pain.

 

 

 
 
 sexybunny63 
29-Mar-14 12:52 am
@geffnyp: its ok

 

 

 
 
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