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I Wonder... (by IndianDreamer)

 IndianDreamer 
17-Oct-13 5:08 am
I look up at you to see ya lookin at me, actin like Im somethin to see-and I wonder, boy I wonder...You tell me Im beautiful even when Im not-when I look my worst you say I look hot, and it makes me wonder-oh baby I wonder... How many girls broke your sweet heart, how many endings before you start to see.. the wonder of me? ...ok I just now made that up-lol got the tune in my head already, got my keyboard out..what do yall think? Good song potential? Remember ya saw it here first! lol:) 10-17-13;)

 

 



Last edited by IndianDreamer; 17-Oct-13 5:10 am.
 
 
 Jahye 
17-Oct-13 6:18 am
@IndianDreamer: Nice one Miss, can I join you with the bass guitar?

 

 

 
 
 im1made4u (22)    (55 / F-M / California)
17-Oct-13 10:23 am
Its nice

 

 

 
 
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