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Tears (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 12:38 am
The only thing I feel right now are tears
You'd think I would forget
But I can't
I still cry
You hurt me
Why?
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I wrote this when I was 13 or 14... it's some of my oldest writings... well oldest that I still have

 

 

 
 
 james85 
20-Jun-12 12:46 am
Wow amazing, very heartfelt :)

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 12:49 am
Thank you :)
this was the start of a long love affair with putting feelings into words

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
20-Jun-12 6:44 am
Awwww :(... Though I never experienced being hurt by a guy when I was a teen-ager (I started a serious relationship when i was 21 ) but oohh i just can't imagine a very young heart already felt the pain :(

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 6:48 am
Actually, this wasn't about a guy... or a relationship like that at all

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
20-Jun-12 6:57 am
Ooopppss I see. Sorry :D

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 7:00 am
It's okay :)
it was actually for a school project we had to write a poem called tears so this is what I wrote

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
20-Jun-12 7:07 am
Lmao! I took everything you wrote seriously as in SERIOUS :D...

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
20-Jun-12 7:35 am
Some of mine are some of mine aren't... this one happens to not be

 

 

 
 
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