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Without you (by cumGETsum69)

 cumGETsum69 (7)    (42 / M-F / South Carolina)
12-Mar-13 6:32 pm
There is a man in desperation who seeks for a love that he misses.
For this feeling he searches far and near looking for a love that none will share.

There are those around him tho that he wishes could be,
As close to him as you are to me.

 

 



Last edited by cumGETsum69; 12-Mar-13 6:40 pm.
 
 
 MissJessica86 (7)   (39 / F-M / New York)
12-Mar-13 6:48 pm
@cumGETsum69: That's beautiful <3

 

 

 
 
 cumGETsum69 (7)    (42 / M-F / South Carolina)
12-Mar-13 6:57 pm
@MissJessica86: thank you

 

 

 
 
 lace36 
12-Mar-13 7:09 pm
i like it

 

 

 
 
 cumGETsum69 (7)    (42 / M-F / South Carolina)
12-Mar-13 7:11 pm
@lace36: aww lol well thank you

 

 

 
 
 lace36 
12-Mar-13 7:14 pm
@cumGETsum69: lol ur soo welcome..

 

 

 
 
 cumGETsum69 (7)    (42 / M-F / South Carolina)
12-Mar-13 7:16 pm
@lace36: see not only can i cook but i can be sensitive too lol

 

 

 
 
 lace36 
12-Mar-13 7:18 pm
@cumGETsum69: lol now if u could only fly u would be my perfect man!! lmao

 

 

 
 
 hardtolove 
12-Mar-13 7:18 pm
@cumGETsum69: I love it..it's beautiful

 

 

 
 
 cumGETsum69 (7)    (42 / M-F / South Carolina)
12-Mar-13 7:21 pm
@lace36: here i come to save the day!

 

 

 
 
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