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Gift Of Love (by Gator8282)

 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
12-Nov-12 12:20 am
I give myself to you in exchange for all you do. I surrender my arms to you, an ingrate I dont want to be. I yield my life to you more then anyone else can do. My hands I stretch to you to hold you tight to myself. I wholeheartedly cherish you suffice is your love for me. To you I'll alway be true till I spend my last breath. A precious gift from me in appreciation of your love from my heart are these words " I LOVE YOU " more then anything!!!

 

 

 
 
 RiLaR (27)    (45 / F-M / India)
12-Nov-12 12:30 am
@Gator8282: I love you too :-)

 

 

 
 
 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
12-Nov-12 12:51 am
@RiLaR: Lol ok

 

 

 
 
 RiLaR (27)    (45 / F-M / India)
12-Nov-12 12:56 am
@Gator8282: why dont you try the premium version and start your blog with all these? They are so romantic and always takes me to another world:-)

 

 

 
 
 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
12-Nov-12 1:20 am
@RiLaR: I dont do credit cards there for I dont pay for something extra

 

 

 
 
 RiLaR (27)    (45 / F-M / India)
12-Nov-12 1:24 am
@Gator8282: hey even I am on a free trial!! You can inbox me then lol

 

 

 
 
 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
12-Nov-12 8:31 pm
To clear things up for anyone getting unspecified thoughts ... All the poems that I write are not meant for anyone what so ever unless otherwise stated, I just wanted to clear that up so nobody get the wrong idea and think that Im writing and/or postin my poems for anyone certain... Im postn them to share my work with other who enjoy readin them... So if anybody getn the wrong feeling, idea, or thoughts Im sorry.

 

 

 
 
 RiLaR (27)    (45 / F-M / India)
13-Nov-12 12:39 am
@Gator8282: not at all my friend. Its just the way I joke. Sorry if I cross the line.

 

 

 
 
 Deadlyrose32 (14)    (50 / F-MF / Indiana)
27-Jan-13 7:22 am
Its beautiful. I hated life all day but ur poem just did something to me. Thank u for sharing ur gift w everyone.

 

 

 
 
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