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What do you think of this? (by Dslaney92)

 Dslaney92 (13)    (32 / M-F / Georgia)
26-Jan-13 9:18 pm
It's been a while since I posted one of these. I felt like writing something inspirational and here it is. Please comment.


I am a liar. Because I told myself I could never love again.
I am a thief. Because I took away all hope.
I am a cheater. Because I cheated myself out of happiness.
I am a vandal. Because I destroyed all trace of what made me hurt.
I am a scammer. Because I tricked myself into believing it was my fault.
I am a murderer. Because I've killed the part of me that once cared.
But,
I am a healer. Because I will raise that part of me, that cares, back.
I am strong. Because I'm moving on, getting stronger everyday.
I am sincere. Because I know I can make it.
I am persistent. Because I won't give up.
I am stubborn. Because I will ignore the critics.
I am ready. To make the changes I need to move forward. To turn this life around. To change the world. To be a better man. To face the morning. To conquer the night. I am ready to fight.
But only because, I learned to survive .

 

 

 
 
 Westernprincess (1)   (48 / F-MF / Colorado)
26-Jan-13 9:19 pm
Grate

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
26-Jan-13 9:20 pm
Awe i just love it its great. .

 

 

 
 
 charmy22 (17)    (31 / F-M / Philippines)
26-Jan-13 9:24 pm
nice! bravo! :)

 

 

 
 
 countrygal850 
26-Jan-13 9:24 pm
Good job. Very true.

 

 

 
 
 Crazybutterfly 
26-Jan-13 9:31 pm
Nice

 

 

 
 
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