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One Lasting Moment (by LaDawn1974)

 LaDawn1974 
14-May-12 4:25 am
I long for that eternal moment just before our lips meet, when the air I breathe is filled with him, I live for the passing of that electric charge from his lips to mine, when all the world fades and all that exists is that one lasting moment!

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
14-May-12 4:41 am
:) ...2 Thumbs up !

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
14-May-12 4:49 am
Awe that was beautiful.

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
14-May-12 5:00 am

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
15-May-12 5:12 am
Good one!

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
19-May-12 2:52 pm
@unwound: Thanks sir

 

 

 
 
 Xxxdonna1 (Banned)
19-May-12 4:23 pm
@ladawn, that was really good

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
19-May-12 4:59 pm
@Xxxdonna1: thanx Donna

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
19-May-12 5:15 pm
@LaDawn1974: it is very good,the last first kiss! And thank you for the sir

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
20-May-12 3:47 am
@unwound: ooohhh! I like that! can I use that as the title? and ur welcome. :^)

 

 

 
 
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