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Leaving home (by JustMeAndYou77)

13 votes
Great Poem!
Good Poem!
Fair Poem!
Rather Read A Children's Book!
 PaulG7719 
15-Dec-12 8:40 pm
ok lol.... my analysis will wait

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
15-Dec-12 8:45 pm
ok lol.... my analysis will wait
lol, yes thank you!

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
15-Dec-12 8:46 pm
Very good! Want us to wait to talk abt it?

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
15-Dec-12 9:06 pm
Well, mrb and Paul mainly because they post a lot of creative writings and poetry so I don't want them to ruin it lol But, you can describe what you caught from the poem if you want. Definitely! :)

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
15-Dec-12 9:45 pm
mk....gotta get some sleep, but I hope there are others who can give a small analysis of this great poem! See you all later tonight and I will reveal who this poem actually belongs to. Good luck and give it a shot :)

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
15-Dec-12 9:47 pm
im bound because of justme's profiling lmao!

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
15-Dec-12 9:49 pm
im bound because of justme's profiling lmao!
rofl! yep but you can give a small...very small description of what you think Paul. I mean, micro detail it lolol:p

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
15-Dec-12 9:50 pm
kk, see yall later!

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
15-Dec-12 9:51 pm
i see the writers place switching between him and his father...... am i right? whatd i win?

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
16-Dec-12 12:23 am
Very good! Want us to wait to talk abt it?
this is a pretty good way to see how deep people can percieve things lol.

 

 

 
 
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