Take me
away, away, away
on all the hot summer nights
hearing all the bitter screams
and the stupid ass fights
it makes me so sick that i'm
standing here
yet my mind is somewhere
so far from here
your life is ticking away, so please go to the bar an have a beer
when your broken hearted kids are sitting here
wishing they had a dad to play
not being the monster
but chasing them away
i can't believe in yesterday
and i need to learn to fly
away, away, away
above the lonely dark clouds
it kills me to say just as you did
i need that high
but i'm not hiding, or running
i'm waiting for my time to fly
away, away, away

by: me
i wrote it for my father, i had a pretty tuff childhood...hope ya liked it :)

Sorry to hear that a father who must be a protector, a provider, friend and playmate when we were young became opposite . I like the fly, fly, fly instead of running and hiding. It shows how strong and wise you were ...

Wow just wow amazing

I love it. Im sorry about you childhood. But this is good work.

Thank u...

Here hope ya like it :)

I think it was beautifully written. Well done.
I've wrote lots of poetry about my childhood too. My childhood was very hostile and writing it all down is therapeutic :)

@alysia92: hi, this is very good, thanks for sharing :)

@james85: Thank you :) no prob

@VampDoll: Thank you and yes yes it is