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Leaving home (by JustMeAndYou77)

13 votes
Great Poem!
Good Poem!
Fair Poem!
Rather Read A Children's Book!
 anonymoususer321 
16-Dec-12 7:59 am
@JustMeAndYou77: I posted something I wrote once on a site, I felt same way. I am a really bad critic of myself, so it's bound to be a reason for me.

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
16-Dec-12 4:00 pm
justme you are such a sweetheart for finding and posting my poem. id forgotten how i felt when i wrote it. you have brought this old crazy man some real joy. thank you so very much. james and anonymous you two have a better eye for hiidden meanings than you think.

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
16-Dec-12 6:50 pm
justme you are such a sweetheart for finding and posting my poem. id forgotten how i felt when i wrote it. you have brought this old crazy man some real joy. thank you so very much. james and anonymous you two have a better eye for hiidden meanings than you think.
You're very welcome Paul. You're a great friend and I love me some poetry! lol :)

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
18-Dec-12 2:24 pm
im bringin this thread back up. im particularly proud of this poem and would like a lil more feedback. please read the whole thread people.

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
18-Dec-12 2:45 pm
I know I already told you Paul, but I absoolutely love this poem! I am glad you came outta the writers closet so I cld say it on ur thread!

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
18-Dec-12 2:56 pm
lol you just want me for my mind

 

 

 
 
 butterfly6577 
18-Dec-12 3:04 pm
great poem

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
18-Dec-12 3:07 pm
thank you
its an award winner.

 

 

 
 
 DragonMaster7719 
12-Feb-13 10:24 pm
brought up for lace

 

 

 
 
 lace36 
12-Feb-13 10:37 pm
@DragonMaster7719: thats the best one

 

 

 
 
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